既然方山一再指摘别人不看书,不看报,那么我倒是很愿意把他的英文拿出来指摘一番:
I feel so shameful for what you are doing on this continent. This isn't where you can abuse your rights without being punished. Make sure you hide away what you steal from people, and save it. Do not waste too much on gamble.
首先,“I feel so shameful for…”让我看得有点怪。这种句式用在说话人对自己所作的或者所是的表达一种羞愧。比如方山可以这样说: I feel so shameful after masturbating. (我自慰以后感到很羞愧(BTW,其实你不用))。或者方山想说别人的话,可以这样用在跟女儿的谈话中: Being a virgin, it is not shameful!
中国人学英语容易犯的毛病之一,对一个词用在什么环境下不了解,这个方山多看电视和报纸应该能解决。常用的一句话是,Shame on you!
第二个容易犯的错误是逻辑关系混乱:
This isn't where you can abuse your rights without being punished.
Abuse somebody’s rights 和 Being punished 是没有因果关系的。这里的Your也是指代不清,指的如果是“车神”的话,车神Abuse了自己的Rights,在这片土地上,应该被谁Punish呢?如果一个只讲英语的人来看,肯定是有点乱,不明白方山想说啥。我想对方山说的是,I am sure this is where you can abuse yourself without being punished, even sexually.
第三个是常见错误,但是判断一个人英语是不是地道,看这个特别清楚,英语为母语的人是一般不会犯的。这就是时态和语态问题。
“Make sure you hide away what you steal from people, and save it. Do not waste too much on gamble.”
这里只要乍一看,很明显的错误就是:steal 应该用stole,gamble应该用gambling。有些中国人很愿意在这时候掩饰一下,啊,我就是打得快,没注意。哈哈,英语要是地道的话,这不需要注意。既然需要注意,那就别怪别人说你不地道了。而且这句话是在说得太不像英文了,属于改错题没法改的那种。
没别的,就是看不惯一个人口口声声说自己英文有多好,然后不停地去真的是在abuse英文。再者,这个人素质实在太差,不出来说他一下是不对的。
和我比口语? 我看没有这个必要了吧~
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其他的方面的我不敢说,口语你和我不在同一个水平。
第一点,
在你的56贴里面,你用了一句话
这句话实在太书面化,说明你不太熟习口语。你想表达“真可笑”这个意思,其实你应该用 "that's hilarious", (估计你还没怎么听过 hilarious 这个词,更加不知道怎样用)。或者再简单点 LOL (Laugh(ing) Out Loud) 就可以了。
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第二点,
你说
你究竟懂不懂和Canadian交流的文化习惯??? 和本土Canadian交往,很是注重表面功夫,无论是否出自真心,说话的表面功夫要做足。别人亲手做的菜,永远是 "its very tasty!", 当别人精心打扮,永远是 "you look great today"。别人问 can you do me a favor, 回答永远是 absolutely。
我对你当然不可能真心说”thank you", 但这是CANADIAN的交流方式,既然你和我选择用英文,那么就应该go all the way in Canadian, doesn't it?!
第三点,
我在FUTURE SHOP做SUMMER PART TIME的时候,估计你还在办移民,所以口语我们就没必要在纠缠下去了。
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说说其他的。
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你来加拿大这么多年,但你潜意识里面还是非常CHINESE,而且是CORRUPT CHINESE
喜欢用收入,职位,学历去压别人,盛气凌人,不可一世。如果你真的来自中国的TOP 20 U的话,then I feel sorry for you。 你只不过是一个失败的教育制度下面一件失败的产物!
具体例子,自己看。
最后,奉劝你学会低调点,别人不摆显不代表别人没本事或是怕了你什么的。
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SO FAR 你和我挑起汽车话题,英文水平话题,(还真是你无端端蹦出来的话题),到最后你都一劣势收场,希望你可以好好反省,权当上一堂教育课吧。
haha... suppose i want to have further discussion with you, but your behaaaaaaaviors, yak!! disgusts me a lot!
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i said "thank you", but you said "fuck you".
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no points in debating with such an uneducated and uncivilized person like you!
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you and me~ we not the same level of 素质!!
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you can stay here and lose yourself, i am leaving~~~ chow~
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以下牛B留言来自 ID "方山", 哥,你说像不像富二代的说话口气??! 哈哈。。
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车神 EVO X
2010-08-02 17:03
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Question 1:
This Article itself is criticizing for nothing only because the writer wants to attract attention and so far you are supporting it!
so you are just being double standards or contradicting yourself????
Question 2:
What will you do if you come across me??? if you consider yourself is an educated and civilized and Canadian citizen(if you are) living in Canada for 13 years???
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车神 EVO X
2010-08-02 16:48
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Question 1:
what so shameful about me??
Question 2:
What rights did i abuse??
Question 3:
Why my comments are so detailed, but why your comments have no details but only cursing???
can you be more specific???
thank you~
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车神 EVO X
2010-08-02 14:51
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hey buddy, don't be so frustrated, you ask for it?? Okay, now i slam in your face!!!.
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lets get the party started!!!!
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i don't know how old you are, but really, you seem so easily to be triggered to get upset and start losing your mind.
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you yourself is acting so immature and it perfectly match your own definition of "小留“.
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and if we take a closer look at your following comments ---
以下内容来自 ID "SB方山"
以下内容来自 ID "SB方山"
以下内容来自 ID "SB方山"
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why did you subconsciously use the impression of how much you make or how much you have to suppress your counter-partner??!
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even if I am just a "小职员", don't I have equal rights to you??! what a sick mind you have??!!!
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all your mentality and behavior is so uneducated and uncivilized! you belong to China and 共产党, you don't belong to Canada this peaceful and beautiful country!!
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according to your own comments, you really make yourself sound like a "贪官” or "贪官后代” or "乡下暴发户“.
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to say the least~ even if you are truly that much rich, that's something you want to brag about, so why don't you just prove it and shake it off??! what BLINK BLINK did you get??!! don't you have the commonn sense of "有图有真相”??? or you are just the kind of person "吹水不擦嘴“!
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you also said you have been ”赖“ in Canada for 13 years, but unfortunately you didn't learn the culture of "keep it low key". maybe just your body eats and shits on this land, but your soul doesn't belong here!
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again, seems you are so concern my English capability, so why don't we conduct our discussion in English from now on?!
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how's that sound for you, bro??!
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looking forward to your prompt reply!!
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thanks~
加国留学生和移民为什么互相瞧不起?