It's not fair to be living on streets?
Then you shall also say: it's not fair someones are so rich while so many are so poor...
And you shall ask:
They are young and abled but why they don't work.
They are getting benefit from the gov. and why they still ask for money.
No one force them to use drug and once you are there you shall take your own responsibility.
No one else shall be blamed.
No unfairness here...
yes, people shall be kind and help more, ,, but it seems not about fairness...
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Fay Wo
2020-06-30 16:17
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Guys, this is a writing competition, not one for kindness. Her kindness notwithstanding, her writing is really really under par. There is no talent - zero, nada.
You can give her all the love for being kind. Giving her a prize for writing is - sorry to say this and i know truth hurts in some cases - an educational misconduct as you are essentially set bad bad examples for kids.
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它山之石
2020-06-30 16:47
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emm....maybe too harsh by saying "zero talent", hurtful words for this kid.
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加国荡章
2020-06-30 18:38
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你的英语实在是有待提高，然后才有资格点评小学生写的Poem.
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Fay Wo
2020-06-30 18:17
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Yes, as truth is. The larger issue is the very bad educational implication, which hurts all kids. So I don’t mind pointing it out so kids, including her, know that this is not to follow unless you are shooting for something no better than mediocre.
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