最初由 那就是我 发布：
笑死人，区区十来句话，竟有12处错误，权当学英语吧。
第一份传真里，区区十来句话，竟有12处错误，难道大出版家连个英文像样一点的编辑都没有吗？本人因为该报曾经为弱势消费者勇斗保险骗子的事，有一份敬意。但是今天看到这行文如此糟糕的法律文书和这件事本身，印象真是一落千丈，何致如此不堪？另一方面，51.ca 真是为了华人作了一件大好事，做得很细致，你凭什么跟人家叫板呢？
Mistake 1) Do not say “You have made false and defamatory statement…”, but say “You have made a false and defamatory statement…” or “You have made false and defamatory statements…” This mistake is typical of Chinese immigrants whose native language does not differentiate between abstract ideas and concrete countable entities.
Misake 2) Instead of “…we found you website carried…”, should say “…we found your website carried…” This is a simple and careless mistake.
Mistake 3), 4) Instead of ‘…a statement titled “What is Chinese purpose by misleading the public”’, should say “…a statement titled “What is Chinese News’ Motive in Misleading the Public”’. Note the title case (capitalization of the first letter of substantive words) in the title. The original mistakenly left out the word “News”. The word “purpose” is OK, but “motive” more accurately captures the essence of the meaning.
Mistake 5), 6) Instead of “The statement is not based in fact”, should say “The statement is not based on facts”. Use “on”, not “in”; and use “facts”, not “fact”.
Mistake 7), 8), 9) Instead of “…it is no defence to simply allege another party of “misleading”, should say “…it is not a good rebuttal to simply allege that the other party ‘misled’ the public”. The part “it is no defence…” sounds awkward. The structure after the verb “allege” is wrong. “misleading” should not stand alone; it should be followed by “the public”.
Mistake 10) 11) Instead of “…the statement posted in www.51.ca...”, should say “…the statement posted on www.51.ca...”. This mistake happens in two places in the same paragraph.
Mistake 12) Instead of “We look forward to hear from you”, should say “We look forward to hearing from you.” Use “hearing” not “hear” after “look forward to”.
这位朋友的英文真好，我也发现介词的使用一直我们华人易犯的一个错误，原因就在于很多都是习惯用法，需要记忆。
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最初由 那就是我 发布：
笑死人，区区十来句话，竟有12处错误，权当学英语吧。
第一份传真里，区区十来句话，竟有12处错误，难道大出版家连个英文像样一点的编辑都没有吗？本人因为该报曾经为弱势消费者勇斗保险骗子的事，有一份敬意。但是今天看到这行文如此糟糕的法律文书和这件事本身，印象真是一落千丈，何致如此不堪？另一方面，51.ca 真是为了华人作了一件大好事，做得很细致，你凭什么跟人家叫板呢？
Mistake 1) Do not say “You have made false and defamatory statement…”, but say “You have made a false and defamatory statement…” or “You have made false and defamatory statements…” This mistake is typical of Chinese immigrants whose native language does not differentiate between abstract ideas and concrete countable entities.
Misake 2) Instead of “…we found you website carried…”, should say “…we found your website carried…” This is a simple and careless mistake.
Mistake 3), 4) Instead of ‘…a statement titled “What is Chinese purpose by misleading the public”’, should say “…a statement titled “What is Chinese News’ Motive in Misleading the Public”’. Note the title case (capitalization of the first letter of substantive words) in the title. The original mistakenly left out the word “News”. The word “purpose” is OK, but “motive” more accurately captures the essence of the meaning.
Mistake 5), 6) Instead of “The statement is not based in fact”, should say “The statement is not based on facts”. Use “on”, not “in”; and use “facts”, not “fact”.
Mistake 7), 8), 9) Instead of “…it is no defence to simply allege another party of “misleading”, should say “…it is not a good rebuttal to simply allege that the other party ‘misled’ the public”. The part “it is no defence…” sounds awkward. The structure after the verb “allege” is wrong. “misleading” should not stand alone; it should be followed by “the public”.
Mistake 10) 11) Instead of “…the statement posted in www.51.ca...”, should say “…the statement posted on www.51.ca...”. This mistake happens in two places in the same paragraph.
Mistake 12) Instead of “We look forward to hear from you”, should say “We look forward to hearing from you.” Use “hearing” not “hear” after “look forward to”.
To 贾宁扬,
Please hire a lawer to write an English letter for you.
If you are short of money, you can post your account information on your 大中报 (like 2 years ago you did) and I will donate.
第一份传真里，区区十来句话，竟有12处错误，难道大出版家连个英文像样一点的编辑都没有吗？本人因为该报曾经为弱势消费者勇斗保险骗子的事，有一份敬意。但是今天看到这行文如此糟糕的法律文书和这件事本身，印象真是一落千丈，何致如此不堪？另一方面，51.ca 真是为了华人作了一件大好事，做得很细致，你凭什么跟人家叫板呢？
Mistake 1) Do not say “You have made false and defamatory statement…”, but say “You have made a false and defamatory statement…” or “You have made false and defamatory statements…” This mistake is typical of Chinese immigrants whose native language does not differentiate between abstract ideas and concrete countable entities.
Misake 2) Instead of “…we found you website carried…”, should say “…we found your website carried…” This is a simple and careless mistake.
Mistake 3), 4) Instead of ‘…a statement titled “What is Chinese purpose by misleading the public”’, should say “…a statement titled “What is Chinese News’ Motive in Misleading the Public”’. Note the title case (capitalization of the first letter of substantive words) in the title. The original mistakenly left out the word “News”. The word “purpose” is OK, but “motive” more accurately captures the essence of the meaning.
Mistake 5), 6) Instead of “The statement is not based in fact”, should say “The statement is not based on facts”. Use “on”, not “in”; and use “facts”, not “fact”.
Mistake 7), 8), 9) Instead of “…it is no defence to simply allege another party of “misleading”, should say “…it is not a good rebuttal to simply allege that the other party ‘misled’ the public”. The part “it is no defence…” sounds awkward. The structure after the verb “allege” is wrong. “misleading” should not stand alone; it should be followed by “the public”.
Mistake 10) 11) Instead of “…the statement posted in www.51.ca...”, should say “…the statement posted on www.51.ca...”. This mistake happens in two places in the same paragraph.
Mistake 12) Instead of “We look forward to hear from you”, should say “We look forward to hearing from you.” Use “hearing” not “hear” after “look forward to”.
We just to watch some TV Programs from China. That is our basic rights. If Canada Government prohibited these program to be landed on Canada, then what is the difference of such democratic government from that of counterpart in China which are ususally critized????
hahahahahahaha~~~~~~~~~ 😠 You are absolutely right!
最初由 eightants 发布：
你们这次搞这么大的动作（平台什么的）是不是没邀请贾老板居中策划呀？把这么重要的人物放在圈子外面，看把我们贾老板气的。收到律师信了吧？以后做事一定要吸取教训呀！别不把村长不当干部！
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